Oh I love your composition and the focus is definitely on the water!!!
Looking through my pictures, I have so few of water! And if I paint the Rivers of America, as an example of calmer water, I don't want to deal with the detail of the Mark Twain.
I have this one -
But the water is just a reflection of the subject.
I keep thinking of the waterfall in Carsland. Show me a picture of the waterfall in Carsland.